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出國留學(xué)申請(qǐng)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金是需要書面申請(qǐng)的,而留學(xué)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金申請(qǐng)書的內(nèi)容對(duì)于能否申請(qǐng)成功起著至關(guān)重要的作用。下面通過
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GrowingupinamodestvillageinChina,Ihardlyeverhadthechancetoseemanyexamplesofmoderntechnology;peoplewhodigwellsbyhandtoobtaindrinkingwateruseoxdrivenplowstocultivatetheirfieldsdonthavemuchusefortelevisiopersonalcomputers.Butwhenmyfathergavemeanoldradiotoplaywith,Iwantednothingmorethantotakeapartthecontraptionseewhatiidemadesuchinterestingsounds.Sittingonthefloorwithaconfusedgrin,surroundedbywiresmetal,Ilookedupatmyfatheraskedthenoiseswere有刪節(jié)
合理地闡述了申請(qǐng)者學(xué)習(xí)電子工程的動(dòng)機(jī),學(xué)習(xí)動(dòng)機(jī)是評(píng)審委員非常看中的。同時(shí),讀了這段文字,會(huì)使讀者沉浸在對(duì)童年往事的美好回憶里,借此打動(dòng)評(píng)審委員的心。
另外一篇修改過的開頭用詩一般的語言寫道有刪節(jié):
IfirstreadthisparagraphMadameCurieasa14yearoldchild,IstillrememberhowwonderfulIfelt.Irememberthinking,Whatesteemedmentheywere!Howhardtheyworked!AsIgrewolder,thisparagraphbecameasourceofencouragementinthefaceofadversity.Ibegintofeelamagicalbluelighttwinklinginmyheart,kindlingaloveofscience,encouragingmetochargebravelyintotheunknownworld.
結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)了開頭,闡述了作者為什么要去美國讀書: